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Hey guys! I've spent the last few months cooped up working on this twilight rig, I threw together a rough little animation test and I'd be grateful if some folks could share their thoughts. Usually I get feedback from other animators I know but I have no idea how my coworkers would take this project...


 
>>2447478p
 
(there is sound, click through to the fullpost image for it)



 
 
Having been the only eyeballs on it as I was making it I worry I may have strayed into the uncanny valley, which I want to avoid.


 
I'll put a list of known issues here so folks can avoid repeating themselves:
 
- It's rendered in eevee, not cycles, so it doesn't look great overall. The shading and defocus specifically are pretty whack
 
- The lip sync is rough, she's kind of mouthing in places and I haven't properly sold a number of the phonemes.
 
- Some of the acting choices are dubious, I would need to either sell that arm swing on "Always glad" way - better, or cut it entirely for something more natural.
 
- the cloth sim is... jank. (The original plan was to use a deform rig, but I ran out of time)
 
- hair is clipping in places
 
- there are still some funky deformations in the nose I have to iron out
 
- an anon pointed out the blinks are way too fast and they're damn right, I just did blinks for a normal human sized eye without thinking. Good to know!
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Edited by Melvelvin
Melvelvin
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Hey guys! I've spent the last few months cooped up working on this twilight rig, I threw together a rough little animation test and I'd be grateful if some folks could share their thoughts. Usually I get feedback from other animators I know but I have no idea how my coworkers would take this project...

>>2447478p
(there is sound, click through to the full image for it)


Having been the only eyeballs on it as I was making it I worry I may have strayed into the uncanny valley, which I want to avoid.

I'll put a list of known issues here so folks can avoid repeating themselves:
- It's rendered in eevee, not cycles, so it doesn't look great overall. The shading and defocus specifically are pretty whack
- The lip sync is rough, she's kind of mouthing in places and I haven't properly sold a number of the phonemes.
- Some of the acting choices are dubious, I would need to either sell that arm swing on "Always glad" way - better, or cut it entirely for something more natural.
- the cloth sim is... jank. (The original plan was to use a deform rig, but I ran out of time)
- hair is clipping in places
- there are still some funky deformations in the nose I have to iron out
- an anon pointed out the blinks are way too fast and they're damn right, I just did blinks for a normal human sized eye without thinking. Good to know!
No reason given
Edited by Melvelvin
Melvelvin
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
An Artist Who Rocks - 100+ images under their artist tag
Perfect Pony Plot Provider - Uploader of 10+ images with 350 upvotes or more (Questionable/Explicit)
Hard Work - Merited Perfect Pony Plot Provider badge with only their own art
The Power of Love - Given to a publicly verified artist with an image under their artist’s tag that has reached 1000 upvotes
Artist -

Hey guys! I've spent the last few months cooped up working on this twilight rig, I threw together a rough little animation test and I'd be grateful if some folks could share their thoughts. Usually I get feedback from other animators I know but I have no idea how my coworkers would take this project...

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Having been the only eyeballs on it as I was making it I worry I may have strayed into the uncanny valley, which I want to avoid.

I'll put a list of known issues here so folks can avoid repeating themselves:
- It's rendered in eevee, not cycles, so it doesn't look great overall. The shading and defocus specifically are pretty whack
- The lip sync is rough, she's kind of mouthing in places and I haven't properly sold a number of the phonemes.
- Some of the acting choices are dubious, I would need to either sell that arm swing on "Always glad" way - better, or cut it entirely for something more natural.
- the cloth sim is... jank. (The original plan was to use a deform rig, but I ran out of time)
- hair is clipping in places
- there are still some funky deformations in the nose I have to iron out
- an anon pointed out the blinks are way too fast and they're damn right, I just did blinks for a normal human sized eye without thinking. Good to know!
No reason given
Edited by Melvelvin