Availible Editor?

Sorry if this isnt the correct place to ask but, would anyone be willing to help me fix up and proof read my fanfic, i know that sounds bad and i dont want to impose, but you can always decline :) you’ll be credited for helping if you do :)
 
Lucky~

@AdamAnimationz  
what is the fanfic about?

@team blueplant  
Its about how my oc ( Lucky ) grew up to be living alone at a lake with some ducks, and how shes practically mute as she can only say the word “quack”, its kinda sad but not too sad though if that makes sense ^^’’

@AdamAnimationz  
mmmh… sounds good to me, and interesting, sounds like the perfect idea for a movie

and how i could help you fix your fanfic? sounds very good and interesting for me

@team blueplant  
Ohh really? yaay ^w thank you so much :D, Im pretty sure it was the grammar that through people off, it wasnt the worst ever, just like a few mistakes, i guess help with grammar and any ideas you have? i’d be happy to listen to ^^ :)

@AdamAnimationz  
ill first need to read it before puting any opinions do

@team blueplant  
Thats fair enough ^w heres a link :)
 
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/337691/the-origins-of-lucky-duck

@AdamAnimationz  
i finished reading it, its pretty good so far, very interesting, i only found 1 noticeable grammar error, noe my personal opinion on what could be changed:  

are you continue writing the fanfic soon? i want to see what happens next, sorry if im bothering you

@team blueplant  
Your not bothering me :3 and yush im writting more X33

@AdamAnimationz  
good, im eager to see more, if you need any help or advise, just say it, i have a few things that i have been thinking during this days, about the history and lucky and stuff, dunno if you wanna hear (or, better say, read) them

@AdamAnimationz  
World’s sure is a small place,huh?

@Minidavi8  
let me guess, you two meet in pony town

@team blueplant  
I’d love to hear some advice and hiserty about it
 
 
@Minidavi8  
hoi C:

@Minidavi8  
actualy, when you see maps of the world, see all the countries, and then you see the space, you realize that our world is indeed small, my dear blue bird

@team blueplant  
Boop? :S

@AdamAnimationz  
sorry, i got this philosofic from time to time, and dis blue bird stalking me…

@team blueplant  
Hows blue stalking you? XDDD and ish okie :P

@AdamAnimationz  
What happened to our town tho? I miss boo and ayylien,and boots and my prophet niggest

@Minidavi8  
it got destroyed BY THE POWER OF PLANT BLITZKRIEG!  
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not really, did it got hacked again?

@Minidavi8  
also, that wasnt a town, zat was a long flat land whit grass, rocks, apples and lots of pones

@AdamAnimationz  
now that my dear bizarre is asleep… i dont want to bother, you dont think that lucky hating every stallion is kinda exagerated? i mean, yes, his father ran away before she was born, but lookin into the perspective of her as a child, she never saw his father, probably goose burned all the photos or memories of him, and probably never tell lucky’s about it, and if she finded out, at her age, she couldt understand all, and when she grow up, and undertand it, it was so long ago that she just simply didnt care about it, or i dont know, its your decition